The cell phone is one of the important and convenient invention.The cell phone change our life a lot.It let us convenient for communication with everyone If we without cell phone ,we will become very inconvenient.
There are many things must used cell phone to communication with everyone.For example,you always talk to your parents on cell phone.If you are a businessman,you can talk to your customer with business.There are many function in cell phone now such as MP3 or camera.So the cell phone has become the most important invention.The main funtion of cell phone that you do not see the person also can communication with him.Besides,the cell phone not only a communication tool but also can keep in touch with your friends.
The cell phone also give us many trouble such as electromagnetic wave.It always affects our health.Besides,the cell phone has a serious trouble that many bandits always used cell phone to defraud.So many people are afraid of using cell phone.Therefore used cell phone must be careful with everyone.
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感覺你比較偏重在寫手機的"功能"還有優缺點，對於手機在我們生活中的"影響"可能需要多寫一些。加一段結論或許文章會比較完整。
"So the cell phone has become the most important invention." 覺得這句怪怪的：因為手機有很多功能所以它變成一個重要的發明?? why?
標點符號的問題：大部份的逗號句號前面都沒有空一格。最後的Therefore後面沒有加逗號
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